Rettskriving - Engelsk

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Novemberlykke 2015
Jeg trenger hjelp. Jeg er ikke flink til med Engelsk grammatikk så kan dere rette på det som er feil her. Takk

There's a long way to hell, heaven and love
I haven't found the way to hell or heaven, but I've found the way to love

the love give's me pleasure and happines every day
And the love is you
I wake up and smile to my life every morning and go to bed with a smile on my face
just because of you

The stars are shining, just like my life
And one day, I hope to be your wife
I will follow you trough good times and bad times
I will be there for you no matter what, and hope you will be here for me too
Cuz I would say: Yes I do

And remember this: I love you my baby boo
 
Ikke give's, men gives! :)
 

iselinn88 skrev:
Jeg trenger hjelp. Jeg er ikke flink til med Engelsk grammatikk så kan dere rette på det som er feil her. Takk

There's a long way to hell, heaven and love
I haven't found the way to hell or heaven, but I've found the way to love

the love give's me pleasure and happines every day
And the love is you
I wake up and smile to my life every morning and go to bed with a smile on my face
just because of you

The stars are shining, just like my life
And one day, I hope to be your wife
I will follow you trough good times and bad times
I will be there for you no matter what, and hope you will be here for me too
Cuz I would say: Yes I do

And remember this: I love you my baby boo


Du er -there og han er -here... da er dere ikke på samme sted!!

Tror jeg ville skrevet here begge steder.
 

iselinn88 skrev:
Jeg trenger hjelp. Jeg er ikke flink til med Engelsk grammatikk så kan dere rette på det som er feil her. Takk

There's a long way to hell, heaven and love
I haven't found the way to hell or heaven, but I've found the way to love

the love give's me pleasure and happines every day  gives, everyday og ville bare skrevet love ikke the love
And the love is you ev and love is you
I wake up and smile to my life every morning and go to bed with a smile on my face , l
just because of you

The stars are shining, just like my life (ville kanskje skrevet the stars are shining, and my life is too/ and so is my life litt usikker på den :P)
And one day, I hope to be your wife 
I will follow you trough good times and bad times through
I will be there for you no matter what, and hope you will be here for me too
Cuz I would say: Yes I do

And remember this: I love you my baby boo
 
haha,, det var jo MASSE feil her jo :P
Når alle er ferdig å rette da skriver jeg om
 

hønepønemor skrev:

iselinn88 skrev:
Jeg trenger hjelp. Jeg er ikke flink til med Engelsk grammatikk så kan dere rette på det som er feil her. Takk

There's a long way to hell, heaven and love
I haven't found the way to hell or heaven, but I've found the way to love

the love give's me pleasure and happines every day  gives, everyday og ville bare skrevet love ikke the love
And the love is you ev and love is you
I wake up and smile to my life every morning and go to bed with a smile on my face , l
just because of you

The stars are shining, just like my life (ville kanskje skrevet the stars are shining, and my life is too litt usikker på den :P)
And one day, I hope to be your wife 
I will follow you trough good times and bad times through
I will be there for you no matter what, and hope you will be here for me too
Cuz I would say: Yes I do

And remember this: I love you my baby boo

Søtt dikt forresten :))
 

iselinn88 skrev:
haha,, det var jo MASSE feil her jo :P
Når alle er ferdig å rette da skriver jeg om

Men kjempesøtt dikt da!! :) Ville kanskje hatt en annen setningsoppbygning, men trenger ikke perfekt engelsk for det blir jo kanskje mer personlig og sjarmerende når det liksom kommer rett fra hjertet hvis du skjønner :)
 
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